Monday, November 14, 2011

Dark Cavern (rough draft of story from 2007) 06/27/07


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Dark Cavern

From Tocs Eloc—Tribal Legend -translation of verbal telling by Cire Darb

Reacting swiftly –he dove into a forward roll just as the creature dropped down towards him. The creature landed with a heavy thud into the empty space the Pineappleman had just occupied. Unfortunately the lantern he had been carrying had shattered during his roll and the his light was now gone. He tossed the broken lantern in the creatures direction and with only the eerie green light from the walls to guide him he darted deeper into the cave scrambling over the rocks that littered the ground. Nearly losing his footing several times on the damp ground with the creature in pursuit of him close enough that he could feel its hot rancid breath on the back of his neck

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